Schoolism, Week Five: Evolution of a character design



Step 1: I used the Rocky design because I think he’s closer to my original concept. I’m still not happy with the Jekylls and continue to work on them. In Lesson Three I found a different body and face that I really liked a lot, so I mixed them. I think they work great together.
Step 2: I'm having a problem with deciding what kind of neck to use. I try both a beefy kind and a pencil neck but don’t like either. Then I remember how Edward G Robinson would wear a really starchy collar in his gangster films. The cylinder shape in the middle of those sloped shoulders makes for a terrific combo, so I keep it. At this stage I’m not tracing, as Silver says this is the kiss of death. He's right. This is a great opportunity to make further changes. I bring in the lapels, so the collars will look more in line. The suit should look so sharp, so much you could cut yourself on the edges. I also make the feet a little bigger because I’ll add some detail to the shoes later.
Step 3: I try using a Pigma Micron brush to do the inking but I hate the results I’m getting, so I use a .05 pen instead. I start to thicken in lines, but still treat the drawing as a rough. Clean-up will take place in Photoshop and Illustrator, where I can really hone the sharpness I can get on my lines. The brim of the hat is thickened a bit and I curve the lapels some. I add some grey to the sides of his hair.
Step 4: First cleanup. It’s always tempting to copy and mirror image in Photoshop. It’s always easy to tell when an artist has taken that shortcut – personally I think it’s a cop-out. So I don’t copy, except for the buttons on the jacket and the detail on the shoes, which should look similar. Otherwise all the lines are done separately. The hat is given a back to make it look less flat. I take the curves from the lapels and straighten them again. The size of the head is reduced and and the chin is lifted away from the shoulders. A cleft chin and a small gap in the mouth are added. At this point I’m tempted to thicken the outer lines even further. It still seems off a bit.
Step 5: Final cleanup. The thicker lines definitely work. Extra features are added -- cuff buttons, a handkerchief. I move the outer cheek in a bit. I think this is a winner. I added some color but that’s not set in stone – it’s likely to change the more I play with my palette.
That’s it! Easy as pie, no?

4 Comments:
I think this one is great. If the suit color isn't set in stone, I'd change it. That blue is reminiscent of a police uniform. What about a pinstripe?
I think you killed this assignment. Great job. Were we supposed to go to color? I'm so sick here...I'm delirious. I'm ready to get a bad critique. Just not a good week. I hope to do a lot of work on assignment 6.
Definitely go with the pin-stripe suggestion... otherwise great job!
I'm with the pinstripe crowd. Love the character, though!
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